导读：To address the issue (要解决这个问题), we need joint efforts from universities, the teachers and the students themselves. We are in need of more profound educational reform from universities, enhancements of sense of responsibility f... 如果觉得还不错，就继续查看以下内容吧！
To address the issue (要解决这个问题), we need joint efforts from universities, the teachers and the students themselves. We are in need of more profound educational reform from universities, enhancements of sense of responsibility for teachers and self-discipline(自律) on the part of the students.
Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should
1) interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments
You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)
The pie chart distinctly exhibits the graduation choices of those to-be graduate. Based upon the data provided above, it can be noticed that 45% college students choose to continue with postgraduate education, which ranks the first among all the categories. Those who intend to obtain employment occupy 26%. And the proportions of starting up business, taking part in civil servant exam and studying abroad take up 15%, 8% and 6% respectively.
The contributing factors accounting for this scenario are in the following. To begin with, along with the admission expansion of colleges, quantities of graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. It’s understandable that, faced with the increasingly stern situation of employment (愈加严峻的就业形势) , a great majority of undergraduates choose the way of trying for master programs to deepen their professional knowledge, so as to avoid a period of sluggish job market and better find the development opportunities. Furthermore, we must admit, college students have gradually transformed their outlook on job pursuit. The “iron rice bowl”, namely possessing a stable and lifelong job, such as civil servant, is no longer preferred as before. They now focus more on personal interest. Finally, under the guidance of government and favorable privileges endowed to college students, the proportion of entrepreneurial survival is rising. Hence, growing students take the road of being self-employed.
Given the analysis talked above, we can see traditional occupation view has been broken. Therefore, it is no surprise to see the current scenario, and I believe this condition will continue in the years to come.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
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